Marina Tsunamia
Warrior
"Stop trying to save the world, and find a real hobby already."?elem=Water?
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Post by Marina Tsunamia on Jul 29, 2005 5:58:05 GMT -5
My friends and I are each working on seperate stories that come together and have the same ending.
Saru- Green Ilty- Red Marina - Blue Last Chapter- Black
I wouldn't matter what order you read Green, Red, and Blue in, but Black is to be read after reading one or all of those stories.
I'm normally scared to post stories. Either I'm not good enough, or I don't finish. If you like and I suddenly pause, bark at me until to make me continue.
---------------------------------- Title: BLUE Chapters Story Plan: TAILS - our group Writer: Rina-ran Rated: PG-13 - Language (I edited most to post here) and violence ----------------------------------
They ran... One pulling along the other behind them. Both wore black hoods, black clothing, and high boots. Black capes flapping in the stormy wind, the road muddy, the sky dark grey...it was always dark grey if not black. Lighting struck a dead tree in the distance. The water continued to fall in the deserted area. An animal's carcass floated past them in the stream being formed by the rain. It's friend's hide was stuck in the mud and continued to sink. A revolting stench of decaying skin filled their nostrils. That's when they noticed the dead horse ahead of them. A rare animal now on this planet. Knowing how areas like this were, there was nothing that could of attacked it, and it looked healthy...even for a dead animal. Most likely the owner that rode it here lost his mind and decided to eat the poor thing. The rain slowed and the wind stopped blowing so violently. It was now easier to travel, but their sense of sight was slowly dissapearing as the sky grew even darker. As sad as it seemed, it's been so long...since these partners have seen such a peaceful place. The taller figure stopped running. They started to scan the surrounding area. Nothing living as far as the eye can see. Takeing the smaller one's hand, they walked. Not saying a word to each other. The taller one still watching the scenery, alert to the surroundings, and always casting a backwards glace to where they had left. The other walked alongside in silence, head bowed. They didn't stop their trek for hours. The rain never stopped pouring on them. They didn't mind the falling water. Compared to what they had left, this was paradise. A light was already shining on them. Up ahead, was the glowing sign of a chinese resteraunt.
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Post by Heten on Jul 29, 2005 12:48:46 GMT -5
very good story hopes it turns out good. Finish it sometime soon go I canread it.
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Marina Tsunamia
Warrior
"Stop trying to save the world, and find a real hobby already."?elem=Water?
Posts: 180
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Post by Marina Tsunamia on Jul 30, 2005 4:00:32 GMT -5
I'm done with the whole 1st chapter. But I'm just posting short parts at a time so you don't have to read too much at once.
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Chapter 1
"Ah Mariel...look over there. Isn't that the most beautiful thing you have ever seen?" The taller of the two travelers pointed to the counter. There was a young chinese girl counting change out to a costumer. She smiled warmly and welcomed the two into the resteraunt.
The two partners had stopped at the resteraunt for rest and a meal. Removing their hoods, the shorter one was obvious a little girl. Her light brown hair was tied up in a pretty ponytail with a purple ribbon. Her light blue eyes had a distant look to them. A look you see on children who sit far away from other kids and only watch them play instead of asking to play with them. Her dark cloths that appeared black from a distance turned out to be just a dark purple. A cute skirt over her pants came down to right above her knees and she wore a normal t-shirt. She had on a small backpack. The duo made sure to travel lightly but kept enough money with them. She shook her head "What do you see?"
The older one had a face that looked like anyone would like. Smooth and pretty with a wise handsome smile. Yet the first thing everyone noticed where those sly green eyes, filled with a look of curiosity or trouble. But at the moment, they looked wide and excited as they were fixed on the counter. Green eyes...they were so rare to see on a human these days, and normally made those who saw them go quiet with an uncomfortable aweness. Long dark brown hair was kept back in a loose braid and tucked under the hood and cape. The slim fitting, black long-sleeved shirt showed off the upper body's shape. Skinny and flat chested, almost no muscles it seemed. The bottom of the shirt looked worn and torn, clearly old and had been on this journey almost as long as the duo themselves. Normal black baggy pants with pockets holding mysteries in them were tucked into knee high boots that were part leather, part metal. Being kicked by someone wearing them could possible put someone in a coma. Lastly, he wore some dark goggles on his forehead. Why, was unknown right now, but they went well with the outfit anyways.
The two sat down and skimmed over the single piece of paper on the table that listed the meals you can order. Resteraunts had changed greatly. In the cities, holograms of each dish would appear as you pressed a button and went down the list. You could mix and match side orders and get all the major ingredients listed until you find something that pleased you. But that was years ago, and now it was amazing enough to just find a resteraunt like this out in the middle of nowhere. More places like this did exist though. A haven to many humans.
The older one shrugged off his sister's questions about what he was looking at. He still fixed his eyes to the counter where the chinese girl was writing down notes and checking the register. The resteraunt was oddly full tonight. They weren't the only passer byers staying the night. "Busy night tonight?" he asked a passing waitress.
"Oh...so sorry I no see you there right away. I take your drinks down now yes?" The young waitress pulled out her notepad. She clearly was just learning English and had learned her culture's language first.
"Yes...something fruity or sweet for my sis here...um...that." He pointed to another table where someone sat with an ice cream, "And...do you have that stuff called Cola?" he had only recently had a cola at another resteraunt. The drink was new yet old. Lost decades ago, but revived about a year before he was born by some super smart guy who was looking towards ending world thirst and hunger. His drink was luckily made a success before he was executed for being insane. Unlike other beverages, it was kept in a glass bottle that had a top you must 'pop' off before enjoying it. Maybe that was the insane part.
No more customers arrived and a few left. Most finished their orders and lounged around, waiting for the rain to stop. Mariel was getting to the bottom of her ice cream as her brother rested face down on the table after finishing his drink. He must of gave up staring towards the counter. All was normal like any night, until one of the customers got up to leave.
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Marina Tsunamia
Warrior
"Stop trying to save the world, and find a real hobby already."?elem=Water?
Posts: 180
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Post by Marina Tsunamia on Aug 4, 2005 23:51:25 GMT -5
The large bulky woman lifted herself from the chair, and nearly knocked the table over in the process. Plates rattled, slowly settled, the rattled again as she bumped into the table a second time, bending slightly to pick up her baby's carrier. She walked towards the counter. Her every step seeming more of a stomp for everyone in the room could feel the vibrations of the floor going up their legs. She finally got to the counter and sat her baby back down on the floor, comfronting the girl working the register about the bill. The siblings were relaxed at the table until the woman's deep voice invaded the soundwaves in the air. "What do you mean my bill comes out to $80.40!" The woman raised her fist in the air and the chinese girl flinched, "I added up my meal myself and it should only be $79!"
The register girl opened one eye and peeked from under her arm that was up, protecting her face "YOUR meal comes out to be $79, but your baby there...children eat for $1.40." she flinched seeing the huge woman's fist move again.
"My child didn't eat a bite. He's been sleeping all this time."
"But I saw you. You were feeding him."
"Don't you dare say that I'm lieing you little bitch!" her voice bellowed down upon the girl. Men at the tables nearby collected their food and moved to the other side of the room. She was simply that scary...and ugly.
"It's only $1.40 more. I'm not blind, I saw you give food to your child."
"Look you little chinese bitch," the woman grabbed the girl's arm and actually lifted her off her feet "I don't give a shit about what your stupid little eyes saw me do or what might be going on in that ugly little mind of yours, but I'm not giving you a cent over $79."
A bottle cracked on the back of the fat woman's head. "Excuse me, why not put her down?" the hidious woman craned the blob, that should be her neck, into a position to see the young traveler "And can you stop with all that dirty language? My little sister is here." he crossed his arms and glared at the beastly woman until she lowered the girl.
"You have nothing to do with this." she barked. Seeming unfazed by the bottle.
"No, but you interrupted everyone's meal here with that nasty voice and odor you dragged in. Not to mention, I think your looks are enough to kill a stampeding bull."
"You wicked little son of bitch. Watch your mouth young man, and leave us adults to finish our business ourselves."
"What did you call me...forget it. Fine...but I say you shouldn't sit there argueing and just pay that $1.40. It's still a good deal, seeing how much you ate." He turned to leave. Only his sister could see the expression on his face and what he was planning.
The woman's attention went back to the chinese girl and she grabbed a lock of her black hair "I'm still not paying bitch."
"Didn't I say to leave her alone!" he shouted, getting annoyed. "I said you should pay your damn bill, and what I said is a very smart thing to do!"
"So what? What do you plan to do boy?"
"Must I show you?" he reached into his pocket and brought out a twisted metal object. Round at both ends and only as long as the width of his palm. He caught the interest of a few people who were watching the actions takeing place this whole time. With the flick of a wrist and his thumb clicking some button on the item, a glowing blue blade emitted from the metal hilt. Many jumped back, including the huge mass of a woman in front of him.
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